Puppy wants to play a Pocky Game

IT IS DONE.

Gahah, fuck you guys, I shall spam with updates until it is finished >D

So, I wanna make this one look really good and wanted to know if anyone could see any major anatomy issues that need to be fixed ;w;
He will be clothed so I'm not too fussed about small details that would be hidden anyway.
Also, he is supposed to be in some form of perspective shot, so the parts of him that are further away are supposed to look slightly smaller.